News report reflection

I worked with Leah our topics where Malala Yousafazia and MND. I think we could Improve on speaking louder and looking at the camera more.  I think we did well and worked well together. I enjoyed filming the News report and speaking about my topic. I think I got Quit a lot of information done. Overall I think we did well and got a lot of information, but there where a few things we could work on.

 

The day the crayons quite Book review

This book is about a crayons that go on strike. One day a boy named Duncan gets a letter from his crayons. The red crayons said that Duncan is using him way more then the others. The black one said that he was only getting used for outlining stuff. The green crayon said that he was happy with Duncan but the yellow and the orange one were fighting over who was the colour of the sun and could Duncan do something about it. The yellow crayon asked Duncan weather he could tell the orange crayon that he was the colour of the sun. The orange crayon asked Duncan that to tell the yellow crayon that he was the colour of the sun. The pink crayon said that Duncan never used her and could he use her more offed. The blue one said that he liked being Duncan’s favourite colour but he was really stubby and Duncan was using him to much. The peach colour said that Duncan had pealed of her wrapper and age was naked and could not come out of the tin. So in the end Duncan drew a picture with all the colours and got a good work sticker for creativity.”The splash of water made me feel…

The boat rocked gentle against the waves. “We will be there in another 15 minutes”said the voice over the loud speaker. We rocked on for another 15 minutes. The boat came to a halt. Adrenaline started to pump around my body this is the Great Barrier Reef. I hopped along to the end of the boat in my fins. The waves hit the side of the boat. A splash of water escaped from the waves and hit my face it made me feel how lucky I was to be here. I pushed myself of the boat and into the water.

The warm water washed over my body. I put my face down in the water. I looked down below me the world I saw could not be any more spectacular. There were giant clams some as big as my head. There were all different kind of fish. It was a world behind what we live in. “Okay everyone time to go”said the instructor. My trip to the Great Barrier Reef was over.

Snapshot

I placed a piece of popcorn in my mouth it melted and I swallowed it leaving a buttery salty in my mouth. GRL singing filled the room surrounding my ears with music. The bright light flashed in the darkness. I let out a howling scream. A smile grew on my face I loved this concert.

Text to world

UNICEF is related to the world because they are helping children all around the who need help. They are giving them food, water and school supplies. They have helped a lot of villages. They are doing a great job UNICEF helps millions of children and adults in country’s that are not as rich as Australia. The children Africa need help and UNICEF have done that.

Text to self

I think UNICEF have done a great job and gave lots of children what they need to survive. It is really sad that children in different country’s are not getting the education they need. Adults and children are dieing because the do not have enough water and food. But UNICEF are helping those children and the ones that they have helped are happy. UNICEF are really get you thinking what it would be like to be them.

Text to text
UNICEF and heal the world have the simartiy and differences. Heal the world is about stopping war and havering world peace. UNICEF helps those people who do not have enough money to get food and water. They both about helping the world and it makes you think what it would be like.

Nanna Biography
Nanna’s real name is Jacqueline. Nanna is on the 22nd July Surrey, England. She has two sisters called Katie and Rosemary. Nanna is married to John and as three don called Edward, Ben and Sam. Edward and Ben are married and have children and Sam as got a girlfriend. She was doing nurse but is now retired. She is very good at sewing and goes on holiday a lot to France. She is now living in Bolton.

When she was little her Dad worked in Loylds bank in London. In the war Nanna’s dad worked for the RAF. Nanna mum had two jobs she worked in a bank in Exeter and then in London. At night she helped peoples whose houses had been bomb raided. Nanna life was pretty simple life. After the war people did not have much money. So she used to go down to Devon every year for a holiday. They used to travel down a long river. Nanna still rember the black swans and going for strolls with her dad along the river. Nanna’s dad died when she was about 12 or 13 he was on his way to work and had a heart attack. When she was 18 she trained to be a nurse.

 

21st July

Snapshot

The ordinary walk down to the beach wasn’t the same. The sea sparkling from the sunlight. The salty air fills my lungs. Nala pounded down the beach to greet other dogs. Then she sprints down to the water and starts jumping in the waves in delight. The wind blows in my face making my hair go wild. Nala runs towards us she shakes her fur to get water of waters sprays evert where. The smell of fish fills my lungs. We reach the exit the I take one last look the sea shimmers in the daylight.

 

Persausive text

L.O. We are learning to use descriptive vocabulary to make our text more powerful.

S.C. We will be successful when we known how to engaged  the reader with powerful and descriptive words.

Should children be able to watch TV instead of doing there homework?

Obviously, children watch too much TV and it effects there education. Children education leads to their life and they need a good job to raises their family.

The truth is most children watch TV before they go to bed. This means that it will effect there sleeping and they will be tried and unpleasant the next day. It is okay for your children to watch a little bit of TV but make sore they have done their homework first.

MY GOAL

I can break up a story into smaller parts in order to understand the similarities and differences between books that are similar topics themes or plots. I can explain these differences in my own words using examples from the book to support my ideas.